Midterm Feedback Review/Response

What was working?

• I liked the animation a lot, I thought the ending was really cute. I also thought the joke
• delivery was really good and gave the robot a lot of character.
• I really enjoyed the illustrations and the whole concept of this project! This was a fun
• comedy skit and a lot of the jokes were entertaining. I particularly liked the part about
• your little robot’s crush. The twist at the end with it being an audience of robots was a fun touch, too!
• The animations are so good! Works great together with the script!
• I think the jokes were very fun and normalizes robots having human feelings
• Aesthetic
• The presentation of ideas was very good, the overall art style was really well done despite a few animation issues.

What wasn’t working/needs improvement?

• More detailed animation maybe?
• There are some small edits you can make in Adobe Audition to make your existing
• recording sound a little more robotic. That might be a nice solution too getting a little bit of a robotic sound without making it too distorted.
• There was not a lot of lip syncing, which in my opinion would have worked very well for this project.
• The delivery of the robots jokes could have been better, just a few re-recordings would have made it flow better.

Overall:

I think my project with Ainur was funnier than we intended. The jokes we had for the robot continued from our conversations of misdirection and allowed us to explore human-like qualities that are often overlooked for robots/technology. Next time, Ainur and I will work more on the animations to ensure we don’t have issues moving the gifs from procreate to aftereffects. Lastly, I would search more for audible robot voices or work on putting CC captions with the video.